Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

Descriptive Text: My Truly Friend


My Truly Friend

“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” This phrase means a lot for me when I remember that person, my only best friend. She is Amy, my best friend in every time. I met her for the first time five years ago when we entered our Senior High School. I know exactly who she is. Amy is a beautiful girl who has a strong willingness, and respects others.
My friend, Amy, is a 19 years old girl which is very beautiful. Amy’s face is oval with pony covered her forehead. She has black eyes and sharp nose. Herr pink lips absolutely make her beauty become complete. Long and black hair also one of the easiest way to describe her physical appearance. As a girl, she is also tall enough with 168 cm height and 56 kg weight.
Amy has a strong willingness in herself. She trusts her heart in deciding something and she does not really care about what people say. Once she made a decision, she would be responsible for it. Now she is in Maldives Island, works in a spa agency and she has been there for two years. She did so many efforts to get the job and finally she got it. I am really proud of her and sometimes I make her strong heart as my inspiration.
The thing that make her inner beauty become stronger is Amy always respects others. Whoever she meets, she puts high respect on them. No matter if they are old, not so beautiful, a child, or even the person that she never meet before, she respects them. Amy never underestimates people. She believes that we must not judge people by their appearance.
In short, friend is a person which is really important for me. I am glad to have a friend like Amy.beside she is a beautiful girl, she has a strong willingness in her life and she always respects others. Her story of life can me. She is my truly best friend.  

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28 Mei 2014 pukul 18.21

Hay Candra :D
nice to see your blog. :)
I love the way your describe about Amy. Your described her in detail, so I can imagine about her clearly, even I do not know about Amy.

Candra, I think, you must pay attention on your spelling because I found mistakes on it. For example, in this sentence "Herr pink lips absolutely make her beauty become complete.". it should be better to omit one "r" in the word "herr"
overall, I love your writing. Keep working :D

29 Mei 2014 pukul 10.50

Actually It's hard for me to find your mistake because i think it already good.
just small mistake like what lisna said, but it not disturb your writing quality.

overall you did a good job candra. your writing is good and clear.

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