Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

Narration: My Brother was True


My Brother was True

My family is everything for me. You often come across the question: Who are the most important people in your life? The first word that comes to my mind: family. My mother, my father, my grandparents, and my brother. Several years ago, I experienced such a complicated condition and it happened between my brother and me.
I was so much in love with a boy in my Senior High School. I was at the second grade at that time and I was really interested in love stories as my age was 17. In one sunny day under the heat of the sunshine, he proposed me to be his girlfriend. It was several minutes after school, 2.05 p.m. if I am not mistaken. I was so happy, for sure, but there was one thing in my mind. I could not accept him by saying ‘yes’ directly at that time. Still that day at night, I asked my parents’ permission about having a boyfriend. They were so kind as usual. My parents trusted me for the relationship. However, I did not tell my brother yet because I was afraid. My brother is a kind of sensitive person. I did not why, I thought that I need more time to tell him.
After so much considerations, I decided to tell my brother. Day by day my boyfriend and I were getting closer. It had been three months since we started our relationship. We used to go out every Saturday for enjoying the view of the beach near my house or just having an early dinner because my parents didn’t allow to come home late at night. One night, when my brother was watching his favorite TV show, I talked to him about Ady, my boyfriend. I told him that Ady was a good and smart boy at school. Suddenly his face turned red. I knew from his face expression. My brother did not agree with our relationship but he did not even say a single word. I left him at the TV room and walked to my bedroom.
The situation at home, especially between my brother and me was strange since I told him about Ady. I felt like there was a gap between my brother and me. This situation happened for one month as I can remember. Oh God. I couldn’t handle that anymore so I asked my brother what was the problem. Actually I was afraid, I did not want to make it worst but I had to. I thought he was in a good mood that day and I forced my feet to walk into the TV room. Yes, I was true. He told me that Ady was not a good boy for me and Ady often cheated his girl. My brother talked smoothly. My brother wanted me to end up the relationship with him. I could not accept his reason for not agreeing my relationship. However, I did not believe what my brother said to me about Ady. For me, Ady was a faithful person and I was so sure that he would not cheat me. I took some minutes to think about what my brother told me before I left him at the TV room. One day, when Ady and I were having lunch together at the canteen, I found a message from a girl named Ana. It made me a bit curious because there was no one of his got a name Ana. Ady was washing his hands when I saw that message. I opened it. Yes, she was his other girlfriend. He cheated me. My brother was true. I decided to break up with him even though I still loved him. It was over that day.
Well, since that day I realized that I should not believe a person too much. I knew that my brother loves me so much, so that he did not want me to get hurt. In the end, the reason why since the very beginning my brother did not agree with my relationship was true. Ady was a bad boy. I thanked my brother for this.

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28 Mei 2014 pukul 19.03

I see that your writing was so emotional by using some uncommon vocab. You just go with the flow and i can feel your feeling at that time.

28 Mei 2014 pukul 23.42

Very good writing chandra, your thesis statement can be seen clearly, good grammar, vocab and more,
the story is good ^^

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