My Special Mother
What is the special of a mother? How can
we describe all the things about her? Do you love her like she does? From my
own perspective, being a mother is a tough job. I feel that my mother is the
person who has the most positive and strong influence in my life. I have learned
so many things from her. She helps me with hard problems in my life and she
would be glad for the good things I do. I am very proud of my mother because
she has good personality, well appearance, and simple in dressing.
As a woman, my mother has good
personality. In everyday, the one who really care about my father, my brother,
and me is only my mother. She knows about all the details of the things that we
need. The way she talks, it makes me realized how women should pay attention on
the things they say to show their attitude. One more thing, my mother never
ignore other’s problem. She always helps other as long as she can.
My beloved mother is a woman with good
appearance. My mother does not really like spending her time in a salon or mall
for several hours like the other woman commonly. My mother is 50 years old now.
She has a short black hair, just like what I have. Her eyes are small and the
colour is black with the thick eyebrows above them which are also black in
colour. She has a small nose. About her lips, they are thin and pink in colour.
My mother’s face is oval which is quite different from mine. If I am not
mistaken, her height is about 165 cm and her weight is about 58 kg. The last
thing about her physical appearance is my mother has white complexion.
My mother is quite simple in dressing.
She likes being enjoyed with what she wears.i think my mother is not really
interested in wearing some jewelries or any other accessories. There is only a
ring circling in her finger. I never found my mother wearing any other jewelries like bracelet, necklace, earrings, and so on. She usually ties her
hair using black hair band. My mother likes to put on her brown or grey
pullover, sometimes also brown polloshirt followed by cropped trousers. She
believes that her feet should be comfortable, that is also why she prefers
simple sandals than high-heeled one. Exception in some formal occasions she
wears her black shoes, the simple one.
I do love her, after all she is my
mother. I absolutely agree that a woman should has a good personality in which
I found it in my mother. In addition, appearance and the way we dressed also
important as a woman. My mother is my inspiration, she taught me those things.
Well, I am very proud to be her daughter and I am really proud to call her
mother.
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Wow, I really love your writing, Candra :)
Yes. I agree with you. Mother really gives big influence for her children. I love my mother, too. :)
I love your writing, especially your thesis statement. You also have good content in your writing because you can describe your mother well.
You have done a good job. Keep writing, Candra. :)
Mother is my special person too.
Your writing is good as always candra. you have a good idea and also it organized well. your thesis is clear and that is great.
good job chan.. :)
Your writing is very good Chandra,,
The way you describe your mother is very interesting,,
Actually, in the fourth paragraph especially in the third sentence, you need to use capital letter for "I".
overall, your writing is very good and interesting...
Keep working :)
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