Selasa, 27 Mei 2014

Descriptive Text: My Special Mother


My Special Mother
What is the special of a mother? How can we describe all the things about her? Do you love her like she does? From my own perspective, being a mother is a tough job. I feel that my mother is the person who has the most positive and strong influence in my life. I have learned so many things from her. She helps me with hard problems in my life and she would be glad for the good things I do. I am very proud of my mother because she has good personality, well appearance, and simple in dressing.
As a woman, my mother has good personality. In everyday, the one who really care about my father, my brother, and me is only my mother. She knows about all the details of the things that we need. The way she talks, it makes me realized how women should pay attention on the things they say to show their attitude. One more thing, my mother never ignore other’s problem. She always helps other as long as she can.
My beloved mother is a woman with good appearance. My mother does not really like spending her time in a salon or mall for several hours like the other woman commonly. My mother is 50 years old now. She has a short black hair, just like what I have. Her eyes are small and the colour is black with the thick eyebrows above them which are also black in colour. She has a small nose. About her lips, they are thin and pink in colour. My mother’s face is oval which is quite different from mine. If I am not mistaken, her height is about 165 cm and her weight is about 58 kg. The last thing about her physical appearance is my mother has white complexion.
My mother is quite simple in dressing. She likes being enjoyed with what she wears.i think my mother is not really interested in wearing some jewelries or any other accessories. There is only a ring circling in her finger. I never found my mother wearing any other jewelries like bracelet, necklace, earrings, and so on. She usually ties her hair using black hair band. My mother likes to put on her brown or grey pullover, sometimes also brown polloshirt followed by cropped trousers. She believes that her feet should be comfortable, that is also why she prefers simple sandals than high-heeled one. Exception in some formal occasions she wears her black shoes, the simple one.
I do love her, after all she is my mother. I absolutely agree that a woman should has a good personality in which I found it in my mother. In addition, appearance and the way we dressed also important as a woman. My mother is my inspiration, she taught me those things. Well, I am very proud to be her daughter and I am really proud to call her mother.



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28 Mei 2014 pukul 19.09

Wow, I really love your writing, Candra :)
Yes. I agree with you. Mother really gives big influence for her children. I love my mother, too. :)
I love your writing, especially your thesis statement. You also have good content in your writing because you can describe your mother well.
You have done a good job. Keep writing, Candra. :)

29 Mei 2014 pukul 10.53

Mother is my special person too.
Your writing is good as always candra. you have a good idea and also it organized well. your thesis is clear and that is great.

good job chan.. :)

30 Mei 2014 pukul 20.28

Your writing is very good Chandra,,
The way you describe your mother is very interesting,,
Actually, in the fourth paragraph especially in the third sentence, you need to use capital letter for "I".
overall, your writing is very good and interesting...
Keep working :)

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